Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 10. Show all posts

Friday, October 27, 2017

Week 10 Storytelling: World

 
Creation
Picture by David
Source: Wikipedia 

The updated version is available in my portfolio: World


Earth was on a mission that seemed impossible—making the world a place of beauty. He was going to need help. Earth God decided to ask his two best friends for help. His two best friends were Sun and Moon. Sun was a jolly man ready to take on any task. On the other hand, Moon was a calm, gentle man with a lot of wisdom. Moon and Sun decided to take on the challenge with Earth, but each one of them had one condition. Sun wanted to be in charge of the world during the day, and Moon wanted to be in charge of the world during nighttime. This is the story how three friends created the world.

The first task on the agenda was creating a forest. Earth twirled around in a constant motion till he was completely dizzy. Suddenly, there were bright, green, and tall creations coming out from a field of dirt. He twirled again and there was something blue and wet coming down in straightforward motion. If you tried to touch it, the blue storm would knock you right down into a clear, slow moving wave. There were rocks, frogs, and fish in this new creation.

Next, was a giant hill! There was a hole in top of the hill. It would take years to climb it, and if you were there at the wrong time, the hill could explode, and shoot bright red lava!

Earth twirled again, and there were some light brown grains on the ground. They were so tiny, but when piled together in a giant pile, the grains were soft. You could make castles, bury things in it, and even lay in it!

One more swirl, and there was a giant rock the skyrocketed up! If you looked down, you might get a little scared because of high this giant rock that split in the middle was.

Earth was really proud of his creations, but Sun and Moon still had their own jobs they needed to get done. Sun saw everything that the Earth just created and smiled real big. His smile was so big that he shined on everything Earth created. The blue waves sparkled like crystals; the giant green branches looked even greener, and the grains on the ground shined a little like tiny brown diamonds. 

The Moon looked around at everything Earth and Sun created together, but once Sun stopped smiling there was nothing but darkness, and nothing the two created could be seen. Moon closed his eyes, and suddenly he lit up light a light bulb. Sun and Earth looked up, and there were tiny little dots that sparkled in the sky. The dots looked like glitter that brightened the creations. Everything was perfect. The Earth, Sun, and Moon created nature. Nature was to be admired by all in the future, and they hoped this would last forever because it was such a pretty sight to see. The world was finally created with the help of some light and darkness. Earth was very happy. 

Author's Note: 
The original story was a little different from what you just read that I wrote. The original story’s main character was Earth Doctor that made water, mountains, trees, grass, and weeds. The story started off with a lot of darkness, which Earth Doctor changed with a little magical song. The song Earth doctor sang when he made the creations was how the world came to be. It was a beautiful story of how nature came to be. Stars, trees, water, and everything else is something that was explained in such a creative way. I was inspired by this story to write my story where Earth was accompanied by Sun and Moon. Earth was in charge of creating nature, Sun was in charge of light, and Moon was in charge of darkness. Instead of a song, I made the Earth twirl around until trees, a lake, a canyon, and sand was created. I did not want to say what exactly he created because I wanted my readers to put the pieces together, and see nature coming together in their minds as they read. I love nature because its unexplainable beauty that should be appreciated more, so I had a blast writing this story. I hope you enjoy it as much as I loved writing it!

Bibliography: Katharine Berry Judson's Myths and Legends of California and the Old SouthwestThe Creation of the World

Thursday, October 26, 2017

Reading Notes: The Red-Eyed Duck (B)

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Duck; Wikipedia

I think this was an interesting story. It kind of reminded me of going to the park with my grandpa and feeding the ducks. However, this story was a little dark. I think some of the things I can change up is the man in the story. Instead of making him sound evil, I want him to be nice to the ducks. I would like for the ducks to always be waiting for him and maybe have him be someone that grew up going to that same park, and singing to the ducks.

I would like to make this story more relatable to people, and not so scary. I think it could always be written like a children’s book where all the characters have their own personality, and talk to the man.

I think this would be really cute, and something fun to read. My favorite part in this story was the singing part. I would like to include familiar songs that the old man sings. I think I’ll have fun writing this story, but it will be a difficult to stick to the original story because the original story I wasn’t a fun of as much. However, I think I can be creative with this story. The songs will definitely be my favorite part. 

Bibliography: George Bird Grinnell's Blackfeet Indian Stories: The Red-Eyed Duck

Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Reading Notes: The Creation of the World (A)

The Earth seen from Apollo 17.jpg 
Earth; Wikipedia

I thought this was such a beautiful story of how Earth created the world. My favorite part was the creation of the stars, and how Earth spit out water when the sun and moon were not visible, and there was only darkness…how creative! I also really liked how nature was a huge theme. Earth was the one that pretty much created nature in my opinion in this story, or at least that was what interpreted.

There is a lot I can do with this story. I still would like for my main character to be Earth, and Earth creating nature. However, I would like to add in a bit of humor into the story. You can never go wrong with a little bit of humor. I also want to include dialogue between Earth, sun, and the moon! I may or may not include stars as the characters. I think it’ll be a very cute and fun story to read! It’ll be so much fun creating the word. I think I’ll really enjoy being creative with this story, and I think it could be one of my favorites! Another area that I could include is seasons!

Seasons are always a fun theme. I think Fall is going to be my inspiration because the leaves are falling around me, and the colors are starting to finally make their appearance! I think there will be lots of imagery in this story I can work with. I can create pictures with my words, which I absolutely love doing! Colors, seasons, touch, aroma, vibes, and many other “feel good” things will be included! I’m excited!  

Bibliography: Katharine Berry Judson's Myths and Legends of California and the Old SouthwestThe Creation of the World

Monday, October 23, 2017

Tech Tip: Announcements Email

Personally, I find the announcements extremely useful. If it weren't for those, I feel like sometimes I might accidentally end up forgetting to do assignments. I usually skim through them immediately after logging into Canvas before I begin the assignments. Thank you for including those for your students!

Famous Last Words: Final Thoughts Fall 2017

Finals; Flickr Wow, I can’t believe its finally finals time! I would like to start off by saying this class has ...